How the moon could be more melancolic;
tonight, Angels brought you the flower's poison.
A thousand tears but any kisses,
only the memory of your tragic wings,
will wake you up from this eternal spell.
Are you afraid of being alone?
The sacred chorus will guide you through the darkness.
I just wish you wouldn't search for your dream anymore...
Why don't you say anything to me?
Forgetting your words become more and more difficult.
With the time...
We will lost our way beyond the night,
and pray for no longer tomorrows.
We shall all live in the same reality,
Everyone will disappear and forget us easily,
because we doesn't need us anymore.
As if you were asleep
I will tell you all the painful memories wich are painted in my past.
You know, the key for love never existed.
This ceremony of sadness,
Is just a picture of the human selfishness.
But,
Maybe someone will hear your voice crying in the sky.
And before you will become a memory,
And before I forget you,
Hold me in your arms once again so I will never regret our last farewell.
tonight, Angels brought you the flower's poison.
A thousand tears but any kisses,
only the memory of your tragic wings,
will wake you up from this eternal spell.
Are you afraid of being alone?
The sacred chorus will guide you through the darkness.
I just wish you wouldn't search for your dream anymore...
Why don't you say anything to me?
Forgetting your words become more and more difficult.
With the time...
We will lost our way beyond the night,
and pray for no longer tomorrows.
We shall all live in the same reality,
Everyone will disappear and forget us easily,
because we doesn't need us anymore.
As if you were asleep
I will tell you all the painful memories wich are painted in my past.
You know, the key for love never existed.
This ceremony of sadness,
Is just a picture of the human selfishness.
But,
Maybe someone will hear your voice crying in the sky.
And before you will become a memory,
And before I forget you,
Hold me in your arms once again so I will never regret our last farewell.
Ce texte doit être rempli de fautes de grammaire mais tant pis. C'est mon deuxième essai d'écriture en anglais, mais au fond je préfère écrire en français.
"This ceremony of sadness,
RépondreSupprimerAre just a picture of the human selfishness."
This [] is just?
(pas sûre du tout >_<)
Je ne savais pas qu'on pouvait dire "any kisses", tu m'as appris quelque chose, merci *_*
Je e trouve très beau; j'ai l'impression de n'avoir compris le sens du début qu'en lisant la fin, j'espère avoir bien compris ^^"
Je pense que tu as raison pour le "is" à la place du "are"(si c'était bien ça que tu voulais me dire >_<) Je file corriger tout ça, merci de me l'avoir fait remarquer! ^^
RépondreSupprimerJe ne suis pas sûre à 100% si on peut dire "any kisses" (<__<) (*tousse* mais sa sonnait bien alors je l'ai gardé *tousse*)
Merci beaucoup!♥ Oui c'est en lisant la fin qu'on peut faire le lien! Je suis contente de voir que mon poème a été compris! \(^o^)/